Kenpachi Masamune

'freaking haiku' was better. At least people know what one is and it makes the joke easier to get. I don't know what you mean about 'syllables' those make up ...

Lol hacking into the site. I see a lot of red names, but that wasn't yesterday and I surely don't have admin powers. I'm not sure if the black buttons ...

Don't just go to poetry because it is easier. I browse poetry and respond heavily to it with changes or pointing out many flaws and offering advice or fixing them ...

Welcome to YWS. Is that avatar accurate. Harry's godfather...Sirius...Sirius's brother's daughter's son... is Malfoy? If that is true about the second part...then well....that is a rather messed up fa

First questions first... #1. Odo Nnyew Fie Kwan Frame Means what? On to the poem: Three years. On a silver bird he flew away, (nice old fashioned plane reference.) far ...

I step in ravishing snow, (odd word choice with ravishing) hugging myself to sleep under a withered tree's glow. Children chatter and play, They dream of imaginary places And forget ...

When the winds blow cold, (cliche) I think of the warm day we met... (cliche) When the fire warms me, (good) I think of your love warming my heart... (cliche) ...

Not too familiar with this letter-type poetry, but I'll give it a shot. #1. To T.S. Eliot April is the victim of unfounded rumours (good) of cruelty and depravity. I ...

Haha that was actually funny, and this does belong right in narrative poetry. One of the better examples in fact. But I must point out a teeny tiny flaw. "Love ...

This could liven up the poetry forum a bit too much, but I am interested in this challenge. Though my ability to write poetry takes a lot more time and ...

*wonders how the above post even counts as a review* ^-^;;;; Well...let me give you one. I can't sleep. I can't think. I don't know what to do. I sit ...

It works, but this use of 'heav'nly' and 'shan't' seem out of place because it is only in those lines you take the old accented speech.The pattern of rhyming breaks ...

I don't see simile in here, the metaphor is really just lackluster and stapled to your 2nd stanza like that is all you need. If this is for homework, I'd ...

I was all mouth at first- A fleshy ring of anxious need- Insatiable. (Doesn't work too well) I hatched a belly to gorge (Again with hunger, if you eat you ...

Excuse my ignorance, dear sirs, (Only Marx will probably not take offense, and he's gone) Didn't know you couldn't handle the truth. (Doesn't make sense. 'Didn't you know'?) It's not ...